Write a list.
Step #2
Write a paragraph about something on your list--it could be a kernel if you want it to be!
Step #3
Comment on/critique 3 different people's paragraphs.
Step #1: Write a list. Step #2 Write a paragraph about something on your list--it could be a kernel if you want it to be! Step #3 Comment on/critique 3 different people's paragraphs.
27 Comments
ANslfyd
10/19/2012 12:43:11 pm
Did anything happen
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10/20/2012 01:31:02 pm
I will never do that too, I mean no one want to die. When I was small, I was jumping on my bed. Then, my foot slipped. I fell down, my foot bump into the nightstand. Unfortunately, my bone was broken.
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Mrs. Briseno
10/20/2012 07:33:33 pm
Ouch! I bet that hurt! Mr. Briseno has a similar story about when he and his brother were jumping on the bed and his brother pushed him off the bed. He ended up breaking his arm, but his mom and dad didn't believe him until the end of the day! Talk about pain!!
Mrs. Briseno
10/20/2012 07:32:03 pm
Um, Joyce, did you follow the instructions? We need to see your list AND your paragraph (or kernel) about one of the things on your list.
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Ricardo
10/20/2012 07:51:25 pm
I won't make a joke with my life like that.
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LIST -Dancing on the road when the light is green.
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Andy
10/19/2012 12:42:34 pm
I have something a little different from your's. I kick a soccer ball at a 1year old kid. It hit her right in the face. Her neck went so far she could not even breathe. That was scary.
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andre
10/20/2012 12:49:25 pm
did threw her head away?
andre
10/20/2012 12:49:07 pm
dancing, seriously, man
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andre
10/20/2012 12:53:33 pm
no dancing on the on the sidewalk
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Mrs. Briseno
10/20/2012 07:31:05 pm
Wow, Stephen! That's a crazy story! I'm glad you're alive today to tell the story!!!
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Ricardo
10/20/2012 07:55:00 pm
I think it would be cool to dance at the middle of the road, only if it's red light for the cars.
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Mrs. Briseno
10/20/2012 07:34:48 pm
Andy, did you follow the instructions? We need to see your list AND your paragraph (or kernel) about one of the things on your list.
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10/20/2012 12:46:45 pm
hey this is a list of stuff a never plan to do, ok?
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10/20/2012 01:02:42 pm
You are right about the throwing thing to other people,but is the person u throw at hurt? Are you scare if the person you throw at call his mom?
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Ricardo
10/20/2012 08:42:24 pm
So you care about your phone more than the person that was hit by you ?
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Ricardo Yang
10/20/2012 08:11:05 pm
The things I won't do in my life
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10/20/2012 09:07:15 pm
Wow, I bet you want to kill him when he said you can't watch the movie. I will do the same if I was you because that happen to me before. Me and my friend are decided to play soccer, and I told him to bring the soccer ball. He promise to me he will, but he didn't. We end up doing nothing in the soccer field.
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Things i won't do in my life.
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10/20/2012 11:37:49 pm
Things that I will never do.
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